Monday, October 13, 2014

Cemetery Path- Is it Ivans? Or his tormentors?

            Cemetery Path: Whose Fault?

  
 When someone is victimized, wronged, bullied and even killed you don’t turn and point at them and say their wrong.  That's my opinion and so according to my morals the people at fault are not called Ivan. The villagers and sergeant are wrong. Ivan is the victim and its the bullying people and ringleader sergeant at fault. That’s why in the following paragraphs Ill endeavor to prove why exactly I'm right.        
 Firstly they probably worsened his self-esteem by being rude and such. And that lead to most of the problems that wouldn't have occurred if he didn't have such a low opinion of himself. In many cases being excluded and mentally hurt leads to a poor psyche so even him accepting the dare traces back to them bullying him. When your bullied feel like your worthless like the bullies tell you so obviously if he had more self-worth and had more confidence in himself he wouldn't have accepted or even be afraid of the graveyard at all.
  Also they pushed him to doing the dare by bullying him. He was so desperate for friends he allowed himself to accept a foolish dare. So its their fault because if they hadn't bullied him he wouldn't have accepted and died. He accepted for many reasons overall maybe could describe all sorts of scenarios of why but in the end all that can be said is that he said yes and carried it out but I'm sure it can be fundamentally traced to him being bullied.
  Finally they came up with the dare and that makes them directly responsible anyway because without the dare he would've inevitably live longer. Finally they came up with the dare and that makes them directly responsible anyway because without the dare he would've inevitably live longer. They might not have killed him with their bare hands but they did cause it in a way. 
 So in conclusion these reasons show its directly not Ivans fault. Why? Because as proven they his poor self-esteem, bullying and even taunting to his demise proves they caused his death. They are at fault and there's evidence to prove it.


Thursday, October 2, 2014

If you could change three things about yourself, what would you choose and why?


    My Three Wishes!

   If you could change details about your life, about things like your skin,the size of your head and etc. what would you choose to utterly change? I already know with a certainty. If you asked me a question like this I would respond immediately with three things.  I would change my intelligence, my height, and hair colour. Those might be bizarre things other people might say but i know what I would want.                                                                                I've always wanted to be tall. Firstly because I've always had to go through being just short enough that I couldn't reach the top shelf or the tip-top pf the blackboard. This irritates the heck out of me tremendously. Nothing annoys me more then seeing something but not being able to reach it because I lack ten maybe twenty centimeters. Secondly I still sometimes am to short to go on rides at amusement parks because of my
height and I dislike, dread, detest you name it I also use it to describe the feeling of looking at a ride/roller coaster and knowing I can't ride it. Lastly have you ever felt like a little kid when somebody your age is angry at you  height and I dislike, dread, detest you name it I also use it to describe the feeling of looking at a ride/roller coaster and knowing I can't ride it. Lastly have you ever felt like a little kid when somebody your age is angry at you and looms over you because of their giant height? Or when you see somebody taller then their parents/teachers and wish you were to because it looks silly when an adult makes a "disappointed" face but has to looks up to do so. So I'm guessing that once in a while short people wish this but honestly I probably have one or two more growth spurts to go so I'm a comfortably adjusted average height person.                               Intelligence, everyone has a certain level of intelligence and most people spend a lot of time increasing it stretching it and similar things so that their always becoming smarter. Like in school people are gaining knowledge then applying it and learning how to do it themselves thus becoming knowledgeable, self-sufficient in thinking, and more intelligent.                                       So why would I want to become smarter when I'm at a satisfying level of intelligence for a grade eight if I do say so myself. Well because like I said everyone always wants to become more smart. Fact of life, the dumb don't succeed so even though I'm not dim-witted I will always want to strive to be smart. Also if changing my intelligence to that of a super-genius like Einstein was possible I would so that I could of course finish school at the earliest possibility. And other things. Maybe.

   Last of my changes and most probable of being likely. My hair is black a boring really dark shade of black in certain lightnings brownish black. And I've always wanted to dye it a really insane shade of blue or dark blue. No one can really see my hair except for me and my family but of course I've never worked up the courage to actually go and dye my hair. On one hand because I feel like I'll mess it up and have ugly hair for the rest of my life and on the other hand because of my mom. She likes playing at me and my sisters hair meaning no way. Though some-day I will most definitely do it even if its just for some new year resolution. 

    Conclusion being that these are my three simple wishes that I would change about my magnificently awesome self. That my height is a sore spot, that I want to have a fast way of becoming so mart I could skip school altogether. Also that I really like blue. I didn't say major things about me because changing that wouldn't make me, who I am anymore.